Engelse taak (nakijken ,indien nodig verbeteren) het is niet zo veel

hallo,

ik heb een taak gekregen van me leerkracht en ik moest los angeles bespreken op papier, maar mijn engels is niet zo goed en ik zou graag willen dat jullie het eens kunnen nakijken?
het is zeer belangerijk voor mijn want het telt mee voor mijn examen.

alvast bedankt:


Economy:
The city is one of the largest industrial, financial and commercial centres of the United States. There is a lot of industry such as the production of planes and electronic equipment.
You also have the film-, television and music industry (Hollywood). Within the town are there different oil fields and oil refinerys. The dock of San Pedro is the busiest dock of the American west coast (Los Angeles). The airport of Los Angeles is one of the most used Airports In America. The name of the Airport is “Los Angeles International Airport or LAX”.



The climate:

The city has a soft and a sunny climate, even in the winter. It’s there 21 degrees approximately. In the summer it is possible that the degrees are up to 40 degrees reach.


Population:

The population in Los Angeles increase continuous, but in 2000 has stopped the extend.
Below I have made a graph:

From 1900 to 120.500 inhabitants
from 1930 to 1,2 million inhabitants
from 1950 to 1,9 million inhabitants
from1960 to 2,4 million inhabitants
from 1970 to 2,8 million inhabitants
from1980 to 3 million inhabitants.

In Los Angeles are 9.7% of the inhabitants older than 65 years
The unemployment of Los Angeles amounts 6.1 %.
Los Angeles have a very multicultural community, 46.5 % of the inhabitants are Hispanics, Latino’s, Afro- Americans or Asians

The landscape:

The landscape of Los Angeles is uneven. The city lies closeness at the mountain Sierra Nevada. It is a steel and dangerous mountain. There is much water with the most known Lake Tahoe on 1899 meters above the sea level. On the east side of Los Angeles There Are wildernesses too .

Toerism:

There is a lot of tourism in Los Angeles , many people visit the city for the beach, Hollywood or for the museums. There are many well known museums in Los Angeles, more than in each other American city’s. I can give some examples, like the Hollywood Wax Museum, Museum of television and radio, Museum of flying and etc. Also are there many theatres like: John Anson Ford Theatre, East West Players, Pantages and much more.

There are also many national parks in Los Angeles like:

The Yosemite National Park:

With 4 million visitors in a year is Yosemite one of the most visited national parks of the United States



The most areas of the park are accessible by car. There are also many paths, so if you want can you walk. you can see also fisherman’s, and etc. If you want it can you camp there, but without electricity, but the basic provisions such as toilets and showers are current.


Death Valley National Park:

The park is on the east side of Los Angeles
You can wonder you “why the name death valley? “ well, they chosed the name death valley because it’s there very warm an dries. The area is accessible by car.