Just another poem (geen titel dus)

[nevaeh1987]

You can't run
You can't hide
trying to find a safe place
but it's way too deep inside

Please wake up
your life is one big lie
you're all by youself now
no-one can hear you hidden cry

So you keep dreaming about dying
but in this wold you have to stay
if you don't have the guts to make an ending
you'll have to choose another way

Take that first step
don't give up and say goodbye
No-one sais it's going to be easy
but I'm sure it's worth the try

Ik ben er zelf niet helemaal tevreden over... ik zal ook nog wel wat zinnen veranderen denkik maar ik post het toch maar vast..
wat denken jullie ervan?
En ehm.. het is best snel geschreven.. dus niet echt op gramatica gelet.. zijn er dingen die niet kloppen? tnx.. alvast