Help engels discussie

[miszz_immi]

Heey, ik heb binnenkort een discussie voor engels over roken.
Ik heb een aantal argumenten in het engels.
Wie zou ze voor me kunnen nakijken?!
Vriendelijk bedankt!


Complete smoke prohibition in hotels and catering industry will cost minimum 50,000 job to the line. Especially, discotheques and bars will be found. That says the Netherlands to royal hotel and catering industry (KHN).

In Ireland the national turnover fall in the hotel and catering industry between the 15-18% is, on the country up to 40%. 7000 people have lost their job and 500 pubs have closed the door. (The Economic Times, nevertheless a reliable quality newspaper.)

Moreover, it is annoying if you are with someone, and you most been go outside to smoke.

A smoke prohibition is not necessary; it is also possible to make a special place where you can smoke.

Modern suction equipment ensures that people no charge have when someone smoke a cigarette, because all smoke is absorbed by very good filter systems. From research of Health, Welfare and Sport becomes clear that good ventilation clears the air more than 99 percent.


It is very difficult to check the smoke prohibition. Moreover, where you want to lay down the responsibility? If a customer a cigarette puts up, which there is then responsible? The customer or the bar boss?

A smoke prohibition leads under the customers to aggression. From a research under members of the FNV allies becomes clear that 36% have experienced it already once those smokers react aggressively to a smoke prohibition. That makes it thus still dangerous for employees and other customers.

[the_darkness]

mijn ogen beginnen spontaan te bloeden.

[miszz_immi]

Origineel gepost door the_darkness

mijn ogen beginnen spontaan te bloeden.

Ik weet dat mijn engels zeer slecht is!

[Deegbal]

Ik heb d'r even een snelle blik overheen geworpen, en het was nogal... slecht...

Ik zal d'r morgen eem langer naar kijken

[Poging500]

Complete smoke prohibition in hotels and catering industry will PUT A minimum 50.000 job on the line. Especially clubs and bars will be found so say the Netherlands to royal hotel and catering industry (KHN).

In Ireland the national turnover fall in the hotel and catering industry between the 15-18% is, on the country up to 40%. 7000 people lost their job and around 500 pubs where forced to close theire doors. (The Economic Times, quality newspaper.)

Besides these facts, it`s annoying that, if you are with someone, you most been go outside to smoke.

A smoke prohibition is not necessary; it is also possible to make special place`s where you can smoke.

Modern equipment ensures that people have no charge when someone`s smoking a cigarette, because all the smoke is absorbed by filtersystems. From research of the ministary of Health, Welfare and Sport becomes clear that good ventilation clears the air for more than 99 percent.


Besides it is very difficult to check the smoke prohibition. Moreover, who is responsible if a customer smokes a cigaret? The customer or the owner of the establisment?

A smoke prohibition leads to aggression under custumors. A research under members of the FNV allies it becomes clear that 36% have experienced it already once that a smoker reacts aggressively to a smoke prohibition. That makes it dangerous for employees and other customers.




mmm ik heb em niet 100% goed maar het is een begin.
Mij valt op dat je je engels te moeilijk maakt.
Keep it simple and you will see that it makes a world of difference


Goodluck!

[DKVTTZWN]

Mijn god, kind... Neem bijles!

Moreover, where you want to lay down the responsibility?

Mag ik even kotsen?

Ben jij hetzelfde type dat gaat zeggen "I'll see it through the fingers".

Serieus zeg... Hoe slecht is jouw Engels? Vertaal je alles uit een woordenboek of zo?

[the_darkness]

google translate

[DKVTTZWN]

Nog erger...

[Deegbal]

Doet me denken aan dat boekje van de grootste Nederlandse Engels fouten

"Can I speak to your cock? The dinner was delicious"

"I fock horses"

Enz.