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20 November 2002, 13:47 | #1 |
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verbeter de foutjes aub...
Mijnen eerste post hier wilde gellie de foutjes ns aanduiden aub; k moest een opdracht typen vr engels en k wil der zker van zijn da er geen fouten instaan dus
hier is t dan... The robbery of the century; my side of the story Ronald Biggs On the night of 8 August 1963 a train was driving from Scotland to Londen to transport a high amount of money. A crew of 15 people had planned to rob this train; and that is what they did! The robbery became the robbery of the century! The police started to trace the robbers and after a couple of months they found them. The crew leader’s name was Ronal Biggs. Biggs was caught too, and sentenced to 30 years in prison, but he scaled the walls of a london jail and escaped after serving 15 months! He underwent plastic surgery by a doctor in Spain and lived in Australia for a while. In 1970 he arrived in Brazil, where he had been living a crime-free life. 11 years after the robbery a detective found him, but Ronal Biggs was safe, cause Britain didn’t have an extradition agreement. His safety was also booted when his Brazilian son was born, because under Brazilian law, Biggs couldn’t be exchanged as long as he had a dependent. After 35 years bailingship in Brazil he return to England; because his dream was to drink a pint of beer in an English pub before he died! That dream never came true, cause when he arrived at the airport, 60 policmen where waiting for him; they immediately arrested him! Biggs is hoping that the court will pay attention to his bad medical condition... Buster Edwards Buster Edwards is also known as on of the most famous members from the train robbery! He had been in prison for 15 years, after being on the run for 3 years! When he came out of prison he became a flower salesman. He tells us that selling flowers isn’t as interesting as robbing trains, because robbing trains brings more money and it’s also very exciting! After a while Buster Edwards had been found in his garagebox; he hang himself up with a rope on a metal pilar! Police noticed that there is nothing suspicious that could lead to murder... I think he didn’t knew what real life was about anymore; after being 15 years in prison.... I wanna thank you all for listening, and I hope you all enjoyed it! Peace, Andries !!! |
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2)ik weet niet zeker of het fout is, maar 'before he would die' lijkt me beter. 3) policemen 4) die ; tussen him en they, daar zou ik gewoon een punt van maken. Citaat:
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Watch it!
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11 years after the robbery a detective found him, but Ronal Biggs was safe, cause Britain didn’t have an extradition agreement. His safety was also booted when his Brazilian son was born, because under Brazilian law, Biggs couldn’t be exchanged as long as he had a dependent.{/QUOTE] Cause is geen woord het is because. Citaat:
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20 November 2002, 20:15 | #6 |
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of je verandert het helemaal, in "In Spain he had plastic surgery".
Misschien niet de mooiste zin, maar het is volgens mij goed en de boodschap komt over. |
20 November 2002, 22:40 | #7 |
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came out of jail zou ik 'got out of jail' van maken of iets dergelijks
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21 November 2002, 14:00 | #9 |
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Biggs is hoping that the court will pay attention to his bad medical condition...
Kun je beter "hopes" van maken denk ik. |
21 November 2002, 14:01 | #10 |
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Waar we verspillen we eigenlijk tijd/moeite/energie aan, de kerel die de topic heeft gestart is ll.com waarschijnlijk allang weer vergeten en komt niet meer terug
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22 November 2002, 16:46 | #12 |
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als ik wat hoger dan 4 voor engels stond had ik je graag geholpen
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