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Hey guys!
Ik heb een songtekst geschreven en ik vroeg me erg af wat jullie ervan vonden. T ging namelijk supersnel en hij stond echt ineens op me papier. Wat feedback van muziekkenners is dus erg welkom. Het liedje heeft ook nog geen titel dus heeft iemand nog suggestie, ga je gang. Hier is de tekst:




I’ve got bruises on my body
And my t-shirt’s almost ripped
I can’t talk to anybody
Cause they’ll ask me who did it

I’m scared to face my family
Scared that they will be concerned
But I’m not insane as you might think
I’m just trying to be heard

Feel like nobody’s listening,
Like I will let the people down
Like the world will stop with turning
And I’ll be the only one going around
I always thought that I’d be normal
Perfect like they want me to be
Now I see that it’s impossible
And all I can do is be me

I’ve been masked trhough all my life
And I need to cut it out
But it’s not as easy as it seems
When you’re teared by all your doubt

They tell me that I’m happy
Tha t I’ve got everything I need
But why, then, do I feel this way
When I’m trying to fall asleep

Feel like nobody’s listening,
Like I will let the people down
Like the world will stop with turning
And I’ll be the only one going around
I always thought that I’d be normal
Perfect like they want me to be
Now I see that it’s impossible
And all I can do is be me

I will try to lose this feeling
I will try to keep me sain
I will try to give op hurting
I will try to ease the pain
I will try to live my own life
I will try to do my best
But I can’t help but notice
That I’m different from the rest

Feel like nobody’s listening,
Like I will let the people down
Like the world will stop with turning
And I’ll be the only one going around
I always thought that I’d be normal
Perfect like they want me to be
Now I see that it’s impossible
And all I can do is be me