[Little Angel]

Originally posted by Programmer
The robbery of the century; my side of the story


Ronald Biggs

On the night of 8 August 1963 a train was driving from Scotland to Londen to transport a high amount of money.

August the 8th is beter denk ik.

A crew of 15 people had planned to rob this train; and that is what they did! The robbery became the robbery of the century!

A crew kun je beter vervangen met a group das meer engels, dit is meer amerikaans zou mijn leraar zeggen.

The police started to trace the robbers and after a couple of months they found them.

Je kunt beter a few months neer zetten, staat beter.

The crew leader’s name was Ronal Biggs. Biggs was caught too, and sentenced to 30 years in prison, but he scaled the walls of a london jail and escaped after serving 15 months!

Crew dus vervangen door group. was vervangen door got, die tijd kom dan beter overeen met de rest van de tekst. In prison kun je beter imprisoning. En london moet met een hoofdletter.

He underwent plastic surgery by a doctor in Spain and lived in Australia for a while. In 1970 he arrived in Brazil, where he had been living a crime-free life.

Underwent staat vreemd. Misschien beter He went to a plastic surgery doctor in Spain..... En had been living bestaat volgens mij niet. This volgens mij de shit regel dus has been living.(he she en it krijgen een -s) [QUOTE]

11 years after the robbery a detective found him, but Ronal Biggs was safe, cause Britain didn’t have an extradition agreement. His safety was also booted when his Brazilian son was born, because under Brazilian law, Biggs couldn’t be exchanged as long as he had a dependent.{/QUOTE]

Cause is geen woord het is because.

After 35 years bailingship in Brazil he return to England; because his dream was to drink a pint of beer in an English pub before he died! That dream never came true, cause when he arrived at the airport, 60 policmen where waiting for him; they immediately arrested him!

Cause moet because zijn. policemen moet het zijn.

Biggs is hoping that the court will pay attention to his bad medical condition...


Buster Edwards

Buster Edwards is also known as on of the most famous members from the train robbery!

He had been in prison for 15 years, after being on the run for 3 years! When he came out of prison he became a flower salesman. He tells us that selling flowers isn’t as interesting as robbing trains, because robbing trains brings more money and it’s also very exciting!

he had moet he has zijn vanwege de shit-regel.

After a while Buster Edwards had been found in his garagebox; he hang himself up with a rope on a metal pilar! Police noticed that there is nothing suspicious that could lead to murder...

I think he didn’t knew what real life was about anymore; after being 15 years in prison....

Garagebox zou ik gewoon garage van maken dit staat nogal vreemd.

I wanna thank you all for listening, and I hope you all enjoyed it!


Peace, Andries !!!

Ik hoop dat ik je heb geholpen, dit zijn denk ik genoeg verbeteringen om een 7 te halen voor de opdracht. Good luck!!!!