[Sander]

Stukje bekeken, maar er klopt niet veel van:


there is a nuclear war between Russia and China , and many people are dieing now by radiation. The story plays in Melbourne ,and the radiation is coming towards the city.
Peter Holmes , lieutenant in the navy of Australia ,didn't have work untill the navy called
him , and said they had a job free. He could go with a submarine ,witch looks for living people in radiation infected places. He would be away from home for five months , and he took the job , leaving his wife and baby alone. After the briefing he would be home for a week ,and he took a marine officer with him.His name was Dwight , and he lost everything in this war ,because he lived in England where the radiation already arrived. He met a girl by Peter , called Moira. The next day they got on board of the submarine , and they sailed to a lot of city's , but nobody was still alive. They also saw marine ships , with only dead body’s on board. On the ship he heard why Russia started the war. It was because Russia would take over China , and this was the only possible way. Now nobody can live there , but over ten years there will be less radiation and they can easily take over China. But the Russians didn't bomb Europe and America , that were the Egyptians. And America had bombed Russia by mistake , cause they didn't know it was Egypt. There weren't many statesmen , cause they died.


Het lijkt me verstandig om een wat duidelijker verhaal te maken en niet constant te wisselen tussen verleden tijd en tegenwoordige tijd.